Punctuation Challenge!

Can anyone in Team 5 fix the punctuation in this piece of writing?

one sunny day miss marsden was walking to the shops when she saw a dog on its own she looked down to examine the label and saw that the big fluffy dog was called humphrey suddenly she realised that the dog had fleas quickly miss marsden backed away however she realised the dog needed a home so she took humphrey to the vet to have him cured they soon became the best of friends

9 thoughts on “Punctuation Challenge!

  1. rihanna milnes

    One sunny day Miss Marsden was walking to the shops when she saw a dog on its own she looked down to examine the label and saw that the big fluffy dog was called Humphrey. Suddenly she realised, that the dog had fleas quickly Miss marsden backed away however she realised the dog needed a home so she took Humphrey to the vet to have him cured they soon became the best of friends.

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    1. missmarsden Post author

      A good try Rihanna! Can you spot the 2A? What punctuation do you need to add?

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  2. ayishat

    One sunny day, Miss Marsden was walking to the shops. When she saw a Dog on its own she looked down to examine the label and saw that the big fluffy Dog was called Humphrey. Suddenly she realised that the dog had fleas quickly Miss Marsden backed away however she realised the Dog needed a home so she took humphrey to the vet to have him cured they soon became the best of friends.

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    1. missmarsden Post author

      I like the way you have remembered to include a comma after the adverbial starter, Ayishat. The last 3 lines are a very long sentence, can you find a place to add a full stop?

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  3. Gracie

    One sunny day, Miss Marsden was walking to the shops when she saw a dog on its own she looked down to examine the label and saw that the big, fluffy dog was called Humphrey suddenly she realised that the dog had fleas. quickly Miss Marsden backed away however she realised the dog needed a home so she took Humphrey to the vet to have him cured they soon became the best of friends.

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  4. Callum

    One sunny day miss marsden was walking to the shops when she saw a dog on its own she looked down to examine the label and saw that the big fluffy dog. Was called humphrey suddenly she realised that the dog had fleas quickly miss marsden backed away however she realised the dog needed a home so she took humphrey to the vet to have him cured they soon became the best of friends.

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  5. Bruce Wayne

    One sunny day, Miss Marsden was walking to the shops when she saw a dog on its own. She looked down, to examine the label, and saw that the big fluffy dog was called Humphrey. Suddenly, she realised that the dog had fleas! Quickly Miss Marsden backed away, however, she realised the dog needed a home. So she took Humphrey to the vet to have him cured; they soon became the best of friends.

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